ideas

[David33]

No matter what happens in the book, someone important HAS to die. Like, think up some girlfriend for Fox who joins the team in the begining, and her and Fox get together, and then the bad guy kills her in the end because she is stupid and thinks she can take him on her own, and then Fox goes crazy and kills the bad guy out of vengeance. That makes the story more, intrigueing.

[ShadowMarth]

That's right, just add cliches!

[David33]

Yah, you're right. That is too over-used, but someone still has to die, and Fox has to have a girlfriend.

[falco lombardi]

ya i like falco better so i guessed what the just make a new account but i think it would be better to have james in the end sooooooo

Or he could come back in the middle and he acts like a good guy and Fox, Falco and a Fox's team come to a planet and James makes an ambush! I think that would be a good idea. Both Falco and Fox fight James and the planet where they got ambushed and it is dieing (going to explode). There is only one ship and winner get to go alive..... But at the end of the fight James is going to catch Fox but Falco holds him back and shouts out to Fox; "Go!! I cant hold him back forever!!!" And when Fox gets far away the planet explode and Falco and James both die. A few years later Fox is seeing falco every where he goes and then in his ship he finds that Falco is still alive but half dead!!!

[leafgreen386]

Originally Posted by David33

Yah, you're right. That is too over-used, but someone still has to die, and Fox has to have a girlfriend.

HEY LOOK! IT'S THAT BLUE THING THAT'S BEEN FOX'S GIRLFRIEND SINCE STARFOX ADVENTURES! What was her name? Candy? Crystal? Krystal? Yeah, that's it. Krystal. Are you still stuck back in the 1990s or something? Krystal was introduced years ago.

If you're gonna give one of them a g/f, make it slippy. Think of everything you can do with as insecure of a character as that.

...I hate fanfics. Especially when people are posting ideas that don't even tie together with the rest of the series or reflect the personality of the characters. Way to fail. (Note: I'm talking more to the people posting in this thread than the OP, as I can't really be bothered to read walls of text that have no capitalization or punctuation.)

[Lkr]

Slippy is married :|

[David33]

Huh, I never played the game with Krystal. So I guess she'll have to be in the book then.

[leafgreen386]

Originally Posted by Lkr

Slippy is married :|

He had an affair because his wife has been recently abusing him. Duh.

And slippy's wife isn't even a main character, so no one cares about her, anyway.

[falcon]

ok slippy is married and krystal and fox are back together so the bot of them are in my book 4 chapters done already.

[falco lombardi]

OK four chapters done good enough!!

Hey people this is falcons friend here just to sya not to send any post's to this and he will takes a break from writing!!